Tuesday 22 May 2018
The house is in the sky (Show not tell)
She woke up to the sound of birds chirping and flying pass. Noticing that there were no noise coming from cars or traffic around her seemed strange, but she never cared. Not knowing that the world was beneath her feet, She walked around as if everything was normal. Until she got a glimpse of the outside and walked as fast as she could. She fainted. While waking up she was breathing very heavily because of what was going on around her and with nobody around her she started to weep, when she suddenly heard a car beep. Sprinting her way to her door she saw that she was on land again, Relieved that it was all a dream...
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